I have begun to rewrite the entire story.
It now focuses on a mercenary named Vasma, and his journey to complete a contract given to him by the the Tallest.
It is fantastic so far.
Okay I have not updated in a LONG time. Bot nevertheless the show must go on. And Chapter 10 is coming out soon. I dropped Axe Jackson in favour of this three character combo of Vex Sib and Zoah. It's too bad nobody want's there OC's on Metal's side. Just Zim loving Irken's and Swollen Eyeball member's.
Chapters are becoming harder and take longer to write and ideas they do not flow as they once did but nevertheless I do not quit and thank's to some kind people on www.Nick.com there are two new character's Vex and Axe Jackson so there's that.